Peer Review # 2

Once again the peer reviewing process has helped. I don't think it helped more than last time because I know that I put more of my time into this paper, so there's not too much that I need to fix (at least I don't think so). I'm interested to see Professor Degenaro's comments because ultimately, his comments are more important. This paper was way more fun to write because the point is to try to get to know a person more than you already do. I'm glad that my peers in my class actually does take their time and read through each paper, to give the writer a solid response. Before I had this class, I could never say that.